You must become more sophisticated in your analysis. for instance, just because the colouring of clothing is relatively nondescript this does not mean that colouration has not been carefully thought through and designed. You cannot just dismiss it as uninteresting. Moreover I fundamentally disagree. The colour is somewhat desaturated and the light somewhat washed out. This greatly adds to the mise-en-scene. I also need to see images when you reference the video in your analysis to help me understand what you are discussing. Lastly and most critically I need to see how this all feeds into your own work. Draw comparisons between this and your planning or final screen shots to show me a consistency in thought.
You must become more sophisticated in your analysis. for instance, just because the colouring of clothing is relatively nondescript this does not mean that colouration has not been carefully thought through and designed. You cannot just dismiss it as uninteresting. Moreover I fundamentally disagree. The colour is somewhat desaturated and the light somewhat washed out. This greatly adds to the mise-en-scene. I also need to see images when you reference the video in your analysis to help me understand what you are discussing. Lastly and most critically I need to see how this all feeds into your own work. Draw comparisons between this and your planning or final screen shots to show me a consistency in thought.
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